Script

With our trailer being short we didn't want to have a lot of talking as it wouldn't drag the audience in also it might give away some of the story, this is the script we went with in the end:

Various shots of a bribe, Phil's girlfriend Emily, Phil and the three blockers
Narrative - Is it about the money?
More various shots of Emily and Phil together
Narrative - It is about the girl?
Shot of Emily in a room on her own
Emily - I'm breaking up with you
Phil - reaction shot
Someone jumps out to take Emily
Emily - (Scream)
Phil running
Narrative - Or is it something else?
More shots of Phil and the three blockers
shots of Samir and Phil on a high bridge
Samir - Take the deal

The Synopsis of our film is that Phil is a regular guy goes to college, works ect, but then Emily his girlfriend disappears for a few days. After these few days she rings him up and tells him that she's leaving him. Phil is confused on why so goes to find her, after visiting her house, her college and speaking to her friends he finds that she hasn't been seen for a while. He then gets blocked by these three 'random' people and he is offered a bribe to keep his nose out of what happened to his girlfriend. Phil contemplates the his decision and finally is pushed by Samir the mentor to take the deal or do somehting about what happened to his girlfriend. Phil then goes to find what happened to Emily to only find out that she is part of a secret organisation that kidnaps children and make their parents pay ransom, and also other illegal activities such as murder.